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Comments of chapter undefined of Star wars: Lord Of Hunger

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Star wars: Lord Of Hunger

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Alejandro_Tavizon
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I’d recommend making it a little easier to identify when the mc or any character is thinking versus when they’re speaking. Right now the thoughts flow a little too seamlessly

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deadly_orange
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Yeah I can make it a bit more obvious, and yeah I can see how they flow a bit too seamlessly

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George123456
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thanks for the chapter

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Zerus
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Thanks for the chapter

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The_Stone_Age
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nice

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