TimVic
I really need to ask about the character design. As someone who was neglected, bullied, etc, why is MC so... loud? He should be mumbling whatever words he wants to say because he's ashamed of his low-ranked bloodline. I remember it was previously stated; he hid away because his ability is only changing hair color. With this kind of inferiority complex, it near impossible for him to speak out loud until he was heard by the whole class. During the teleportation, he spoke out-loud too. Why?
This much hatred is ridiculous. A person needs to be invested in order to feel hatred. A more realistic emotion would be indifference. People wouldn't care about him and that's it, i hate novels that try to squeeze as much angst as they can from the reader, this is downright depressing, and i don't read books to depress myself further than i already am.
The MC seems to deserve this⌠everything heâs done so far has proven he is indeed trash. You get a system that says you can absorb bloodlines and you just ignore it. I understand that you may or may not believe the system, but someone who has been trash suddenly awakens a power, why would he not test it outâŚ