TimVic
I just wanted to say that this first chapter was like a breath of free air to me. After reading more than a dozen web novels, it's nice to read something that didn't scratch my brain to figure out what the author was trying to convey. It hooked me in and peeked my interest which is honestly rare to find for novels these days. I'm not sure if this quality will keep up but so far I see high potential for where this could go. Keep it up Author!