LivingVoid
giving suggestions is ok but asking author to do something which is not really necessary is not ok.... something which is fresh and ok for one is cringey for others... why dont people get it.... instead of commanding author it is better to write your own damn novel... if MC would get dazzed then people would call him good for nothing pervert now he is focused so it is same old boring reaction... jeez that was not important so we can slide away such things unless author puts a hole in some important plot