LivingVoid
The whirlpool should be his greatest secret đđ What if his future enemies caught her and read her mind. You are the author so you might say that won't happen but I look at story objectively so everything could happen
The way you approach the mc strengthening his partner is something ive never seen before. Its actual teamwork and the mc himself isnt the cold heartless mc that leaves his partner and the plot is shallow. love it
LivingVoid:you should write this when Athan actually makes enemies xD anyway something is going to happen and it's everyone's favorite----* decode my scribble below*... xD
Many people here hating on why he is risking exposing the whirlpool. No MC does that! BUT I personally find it very pleasing and satisfying that MC is helping the person he LOVES, the person who almost DIED to get the power just to be with HIM. So instead of letting her stay weak and feel miserable for not being able to fight alongside her beloved, he's trying make her strong so that there's love between without any self loathing and regret. The MC having the heart to put person he cares about, the person who is most important to him in the whole universe, the person he LOVES, above his SECRET to strength is very heroic and shows that the MC indeed loves her puts her happiness and well being above his apprehension and is not just using her for s*x. Great job author! â€