Comments of chapter undefined of The Tale of the Void Emperor
The Tale of the Void Emperor
LivingVoid
Chapter comments37
So far I like the concept behind the novel, the base storyline seems pretty decent with some cliches but one thing i hope improves is the grammar and the consistency of perspective. I usually don't care too much about grammar but the grammar so far is extremely bad. If you have trouble you can use free online grammar checkers as they tend to help out a lot. I know I use them from time to time.
after all this chapters and we don't know how the mc looks .. all I know that he has a perfect body ? so is he handsome or not I hope he will be or if he has an average face because like what you said that his body looks and feature looks like the previous body , but after refining his body he should be handsome no ?
No, WebNovel could exist without authors, adding these unbelievably unneeded, dumb decision arks with the main characters. Gigi, the main character had good progression his mentality and his work at that and his gain but you just change the scene and said oh wait look we gotta do a couple more of those really stupid scenes with the young master and here we go.
