LivingVoid
a unique world, mhm his own creation, and the first chapter starts like every beating trash up novel out there. i am so a nice boy, but i am weak and get tortured and killed because there is now law and i have no brain, no spine and no connections. then this trash gets for sure resurrected in the next chapter and beats the crap out of every who looks at him somehow wrong. because he like the way he get handled and he admired the guy that killed him....and im sure, even with a cheat and op, he meets every second chapter a guy stronger then him for a reason and gets in trouble. with violence as a solution. why not just a random guy with diabetes and fat because of it helps a guy or girl out of class in trouble and gets killed because of a heart failure trough his weak condition? why should i read a novel over a mc who is just a weak punchbag with no personality, hobby, interest or talent??? just because, isekai, op and harem? it this your life and dreams? mhm
I'll be lenient because this is your first book but the words seems blad with no emotions, you're not bringing out the real essence of your art. Your words are meant to make the reader have a vivid imagination of the scenery, to make the reader delve really into the fantasy. I really like the direction which I presume the book is moving in and I hope you improve your writing style.
Yeah, the truth is we do that a lot assuming what's going to happen, but it's something that happens involuntarily when you read a lot that's why cliche stories are boring most of the time, you're right that we shouldn't share those opinions in the comments. I usually ignore them and don't comment on it or when I do comment I use them as hypothetical jokes but if that bothers you I won't, Thanks for writing, I think I will enjoy this novel.👍👍👍👍