BoiGeorge
I enjoyed the chapter, is this girl a possible love interest/follower he can have help him on his journey? I feel like he needs someone to replace what's his name who died. Also I'm pretty sure she owes him a life debt for saving her. AND you could get Lucius into a whole heap of trouble if you pull the memory of him giving her the book. Just give that memory to Amelia Bones and he's off to Azkaban or at least a trial where rose could get some compensationđ˛đ˛
I hope there will be more to the Rose Character, so that it wont be as shallow as most of them, i hope im not offending, because i like this fan-fic, but its just that near all of the characters are too shallow, or more like made to be background ones, its like craig when he died, for me as reder it was like oh, well so. When there is too many and there isnt any more of character interaction its... . Well as you just introduced Rose story it would be nice to have her more interact with oz and not having he too shallow.
Just a quick comment from myself about the story thus far and where its heading. Rose is my second attempt at making an interesting side-character and with her 'origin' summed up I hope to lead her on as an interesting person. As for those wondering whether she will be integral all I can say right now is that she will be important to the plot at Hogwarts in the future, however for Oz's main story she will only reside on the side. In the next year the story will split into two as Oz goes on his own 'adventure'. Split between the main story (Oz's journey) and the side story (Hogwarts group).
good chapter author san. and a question is that is this girl rose going to be relevant to story or just a side character. cause she not that interesting and her character doesn't fell special at all. so what will happen to her because well she is justa nobody here and including her more in this story will make it look uninteresting and unneeded.