Comments of chapter undefined of Affinity:Chaos

There is a lot or retyping in this chapter just as a reminder for future fix

Same lines repeated almost the same way for literally the entire chapter I want a refund for this one

pls fix this chapter. it repeated the same paragraph 3 different ways in a row and there are numerous other mistakes that by themselves would be minor but combined make this chapter terrible

this chapter was absolutely terrible, i hope it's not gonna become a new standard for the author, it would be very disappointing to see such great story die

This was a super obnoxious chapter

That chaper seemed like a rough draft rather than an actual finished chapter. It was really hard to read as it kept repeating scenes with minor variations to them.

yea that chapter was trash

Called it

Wow, this chapter was a hot mess. Editing needed to make it make sense!