Comments of chapter undefined of Affinity:Chaos

I agree with the others. there should of been a few chapters of his process of him breaking through to the sage plan. Not just writing it in as an after thought. Things like new abilities and break throughs shouldn't be just written in like we should already know or casually stated. us readers would like the author to keep this in mind when further writing

i was actly hoping to see the process of when he broke through man

Springs halo Try to breathe right noW and think! You uinderstand that you goofed and rushed the story.

I'm truly telling you Author, the chapters are getting shorter and shorter.

when did MC breakthrough

did I missed a chapter? normally there would be a whole chapter of Grey trying to break through and succeeding

author please fix ur chapters this is not as IT used to be anymore its getting worse for every chapter the training arv in the secreat dimension was mad good but then this how did he even become a dage planer doesnt that deserve a chapter instead of All these fillers??

Author when will make grey unite with his parents you are prolonging their reunion and we are getting impatient, so please make it happen already.

the excitement when breaking through is a must why removed or times skip that part.

what the heck we had to read multiple ch on the other characters but you done even go over the mc breaking through to sage... the good exp I've had is declining as we read more. I hope it can reachieve what was going.

hacks

I understand everyone since it was such a big event when he broke through the Overlord Plane. And now breaking through the Sage plane was just a small sentence comparing him and his enemy.