Comments of chapter undefined of Affinity:Chaos

worst kind of storytelling.. writing explanations in brackets or comments, rather than making it part of the story

Yeah people only care about the result not the battle.

I like the battle

good storu

Thank you author for this heartwarming chapter

honestly at this point I think you would be better off telling the story in past tense. it reads better as a recounted sorry rather than one that is currently happening

Obrigado pelo capítulo

this author

His mom is boss!

amazing chap......

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter. and nice life lessons

Thanks for the chapter

First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chapters thanks for your hard work