SuSuSu Ruyi
author I'd really love to support you but your pulling down my moral, what is the need or Being and Heating being married if your story keeps telling us how she thinks her husband is a driver and more so she doesn't even make an effort. every person dying loves to make last memories to be cherished while she's gone but your FL is money hungry with is not a good portray at all. maybe I'll consider coming back when you've decided to moved ahead to something else like I guessed 5 chapters and we're still on the shooting part if your out of ideas finalize the book and do some thing else. don't feel offended but I giving you genuine ideas, the longer you drag the story the more boring it becomes