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Inventors system

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Nrm2022Lv15Nrm2022

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Fuck_Dis_lifeLv2Fuck_Dis_life

Keep it up❤️❤️

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TacoKunLv4TacoKun

Good First Chapter.

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BussyboiLv14Bussyboi

First chapter, tonnes of gramatical issues. Capitalize the first word of every sentence. When someone is talking, you start the quotes on a new line when a new person talks. "How are you?" "I'm good," He replied. "How about you?" I like the plot, but the grammar is really flawed. I'll keep reading anyway.

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ChaospatLv14Chaospat

You should modify it to put a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence and a period at the end.

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Queen_IamLv2Queen_Iam

Can't wait for development ❤️❤️

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Anime_Lover_6337Lv4Anime_Lover_6337

is female lead a robot

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Nrm2022Lv15Nrm2022

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AshtynKCLv14AshtynKC

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DaoistDjNIv8Lv13DaoistDjNIv8

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borimicLv15borimic

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SugerSagaLv12SugerSaga

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SugerSagaLv12SugerSaga

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Lucas_SchmidtLv15Lucas_Schmidt

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Lucas_SchmidtLv15Lucas_Schmidt

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Lucas_SchmidtLv15Lucas_Schmidt

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Lucas_SchmidtLv15Lucas_Schmidt

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SOCIOPATLv10SOCIOPAT

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