Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

I think the scheminng compliments your writting style. Kudo To you btw seems like your writing more of the core of the story and not the nitty details, not trying to throw hate but my god it was hard reading the chapters about Otto setting up the 100,000 point coin array

I’ve always prefered to read books with hardly any schemes, fighting is the way to go imo. Scheming just makes the chapters seem so long. But that’s my personal opinion. Thanks for the chapter ✌🏼

I like the schemes, but i also like the variety. We can’t have every floor the same, right? I like the current mix of fighting and schemes throughout the story. So keep up the good work!

i for one enjoy fighting centered floors much better because in this kind of story that the mc has foreknowledge and a lot of experience the schemes are mostly repetitive or boring unless theyre very creatively written(thats just what ive seen in other works im not quite sure about this one) and for that i feel like it would take too much effort. so yeah an all fighting floor is preferred for me

I like the non-fighting floor so far

thanks

The schemes are what carries the story, fightings great where there’s a challenge but just fighting without planning and a bit of schemeing will just serve to hurt the story overall, imo go for verity. Have some cheese, epic battle floors (like 1 or maybe 2) and then a unique and cool scheme floor, a thought cookie

I think that the chapter was splendidly done.

I tend to like more the non-fighting chapters than the fights that take too long to end. That doesn't mean that I don't like a good well written fighting scene, I just hate it when it takes more than 4 (or so) chapters to finish a 1vs1 fight. Love this novel so far, many thanks for the hard work!!

thanks for the chapter! 😃 --more division, easier to conquer.

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