Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
NightWind
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The price goods are selling at lends credence to my earlier speculation that the golden halo might not be as "exclusive" as originally implied. Also besides that, I think the Author should be careful about Otto encountering items from his past life - You mention the tower has an obscene amount of inhabitants, and so unless there is some way items are taken out of circulation (degradation/destruction/the get deleted when the owner dies or something) then the chances of Otto ever finding the exact same item is basically impossible. I understand that it's more likely he would encounter the same item if it has a high grade, since the total pool of high grade items must be proportionally much smaller, but even still it's somewhat unbelievable. The Alchemy set is particularly suspicious. If the two items that need to be combined to make it a gold set were already together when Otto bought/acquired them in his previous life, there is a reasonable chance he wouldn't have known about his "gold item" being two silver items. The other suspicious thing is the item itself. Since the item is crafted as part of a set, and when combined they are a gold rated item, why would they EVER be separated? It's the small things like this that an editor might be able to spot. Either way, right now they are only nit-picks, not a systemic problem, and this don't detract a massive amount from enjoyment. But I can see it getting draining if every single item in the world is something Otto had used in his previous life - That plot armour is way too thick.
