Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
NightWind
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The mc is conceited. He seemed to have any sense of urgency or even prirorities. He's a regressor yet he acts like a child. Too careless too the point that only plot armor could save him. If that garrote have gone all out, he wouldve lost a life due to his carelessness. Author are you chinese? Please don't use 'Chingchang Bullshit' style in your novel.
You must be a chinese. I wasnt a racist before covid-19 struck and obviously instead of owning to you chinese pigs' mistake, you chineses chose to blame others and as if not contented enough go into different countries to spread it. If the end of the world ever come id erase you pigs in the world.
ShibaTatsuya786:So you're racist and a r*tard. Nice
This chapter was shit. Things were too forced. They were not representing of someone who returned in time. He didn't plan any of this. He was just winging it. He even made couple of mistakes. What i don't understand is why he came to death ring without arranging his staying place? Why didn't he use his spell books beforehand? What was the hurry? He clearly didn't know of any talent beforehand to justify his visit here without preparing. Also isn't death ring outside safe zone? Didn't he say before that he will only step out after learning all his spells? If i didn't like the last 21 chapters, i'd have dropped this novel because of this chapter only. Please plan beforehand and do not rush the chapters just to keep up to the update pace. I liked the previous chapters and hope the story keeps the previous quality.
Should habe named this chapter ,Please drop this story‘, because that is the impression I got when reading this crap...First twenty chapters basically for nothing, way to go to destroy your own story... Also why the hell would he nonchalantly pay her debt? You didn‘t even explain what that means for her and him. Do they now have a binding contract that she works for him? Or does he take her word for investing in her training? Without a contract this whole thing doesn‘t make sense. No one would invest into someone without any insurance whatsoever. If he does, that would be the nail in the coffin for this story....
IT was fun while it lasted, but I am checking out now. You should get a little bit more life experience, bc how you write interactions is very unnatural. Also for a guy who has so much life expirience MC too often makes VERY unintelligent decisions. If it was just a fight novel/first time climbing it would be pretty good. But MC is supposed to be an old Master and behaves like a small child. Danke for the story. Peace out
