how many chaps till he goes to the sea and sail or time skip when he grows .. since thats probably one of the major reasons on why your fic is at the bottom .. too slow ..
You really got to pick it up Timescape or something because the story is getting very depressing and not going anywhere I’m trying to stick it out but it’s making it very
one piece is dark . piracy slavery rape murder .
I have good numbers of happy go lucky op FF.
I this different development approach .
Just don't drop .