Vostarian
The story seems fine so far but there’s just something that feels wrong with the way vlad talks. I don’t know he seems to speak too much? By reading the first few chapter I got the feeling he should be more straight to the point, blunt instead of this wordy noble like speech I guess? Like in one of the previous chapters I felt like instead of ranting of how idiotic the dude that bought him is he would first show his anger and disdain with his actions first?. (I don’t know probably just me) Well either way nice chapters so far
oh yeah i kinda stopped reading mostly because im back to back reading some other novels i will probably come back to this when im done
Vostarian:Sup, how have you been? Quick question + update on what's going with the story.(Census time) Are you still reading the story? Have you dropped by chance half-way? Why so? Well worry not, I have reworked the story. There's a new approach to the story, darker approach and with the MC being a bit calmer and composed with himself. He gets quicker to his first life identity which is Vlad. You'll see it inside the story, + the reasons why he couldn't from the start move along the first life identity. There's lastly aside from this new approach I've written the MC and other characters, a new system power for Vlad. Volume 1 where he is a slave is over, also there's not much focus on this regard, more close to a training arc + devil fruit finding Volume 2 is still going without breaks. Reply back, if you got a change of mind, and picked it back. So I don't seem to have talked to myself like a crazy person. Take care and let's hope I heard from you again. Your truly sleepy Morpheus. P.S: You disliked Vlad talking too much correct? In this new version, he doesn't talk too much when it doesn't require the situation.