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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]

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Auger_Fate
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The story seems fine so far but there’s just something that feels wrong with the way vlad talks. I don’t know he seems to speak too much? By reading the first few chapter I got the feeling he should be more straight to the point, blunt instead of this wordy noble like speech I guess? Like in one of the previous chapters I felt like instead of ranting of how idiotic the dude that bought him is he would first show his anger and disdain with his actions first?. (I don’t know probably just me) Well either way nice chapters so far

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Auger_Fate
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oh yeah i kinda stopped reading mostly because im back to back reading some other novels i will probably come back to this when im done

Vostarian:Sup, how have you been? Quick question + update on what's going with the story.(Census time) Are you still reading the story? Have you dropped by chance half-way? Why so? Well worry not, I have reworked the story. There's a new approach to the story, darker approach and with the MC being a bit calmer and composed with himself. He gets quicker to his first life identity which is Vlad. You'll see it inside the story, + the reasons why he couldn't from the start move along the first life identity. There's lastly aside from this new approach I've written the MC and other characters, a new system power for Vlad. Volume 1 where he is a slave is over, also there's not much focus on this regard, more close to a training arc + devil fruit finding Volume 2 is still going without breaks. Reply back, if you got a change of mind, and picked it back. So I don't seem to have talked to myself like a crazy person. Take care and let's hope I heard from you again. Your truly sleepy Morpheus. P.S: You disliked Vlad talking too much correct? In this new version, he doesn't talk too much when it doesn't require the situation.
Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

The chapter was good, modtly the beginning. The ending with the fatso deciding to punish the MC because a prostitute wouldnt sleep with him seemed extremely forced.

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Bruno_Corre
Bruno_CorreLv2Bruno_Corre

In Portuguese _ Já estou imaginando maneiras de matar o porco gordo.

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RoeDear
RoeDearLv14RoeDear

Nice

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DaoistnM9RTV
DaoistnM9RTVLv2DaoistnM9RTV

Everything is so interesting.

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Name2486
Name2486Lv5Name2486

thanks for the chapter.

WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv14WebReaderPub

the first part was intersting, but right now you are slowing a little bit too much.

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DaoistORB0QY
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Thanks

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Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

It seems that the MC is the son of the dead crown prince, making the MC the crown prince of the kingdom and in the future the King, very good.

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Ell_LeFant
Ell_LeFantLv11Ell_LeFant

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

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ptbv
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thanks for the chapter

Thiago_Gomes_8808
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Obrigado pelo capitulo