Comments of chapter undefined of God´s Eyes
God´s Eyes
HideousGrain
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love this book, (currently all my stones go to it) and I think its going in a good direction for the underlying story development. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK SENPAI!!
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HideousGrain
So I just want to ask why you said he didnt want to expose that he has an origin flame? Its not exactly like hes been keeping it under wraps as be uses it in practically every fight. Maybe if it was something like how Sharon could tell it was an origin flame cause he had one as well but you just kinda said that he has doesnt want to show it to others. Sorry for the nit pick on a chapter 15 chapters after recent release. Keep up the good work!!
This novel has a lot of potential but the author is still very in experienced in my opinion. world building is good, fight sequences are up to par as well. However, dialogue needs a lot of work. he has experienced and powerful people acting as if they are teenagers, blurting things out and trying to ask the mc to do things instead of telling him. Remember, he has immense potential but that is all he has, potential. If the author can fix his dialogue, this is top ten material easily. Good job so far and im curious to see how much better the novel will become.
