Comments of chapter undefined of God´s Eyes

Not bad there is definitely some promise in the story but if I could impart some critique here. So far the story it robotic and lifeless. It feels like there's a 3rd party just telling us about his day. What is he thinking? How is he feeling? We need more description adverbs and adjectives instead of "This made him sad" or "He is happy". He is not sad. He is loathing and in self hatred for being able to do anything to save his mother. Right now the story is the equivalent to the scene of the Office episode where Dwight says "It is your Birthday" if you get what I mean. Same energy.

thanks for the chapter

good chapter. wonder what he does with them.

Thanks for the chapter~🐱

Good!

A***w so cute i love that he has so many baby foxs!!

150 cubs Bet some of them are gonna end up as lamb chops 😏

Catch them all, fluffs!

Nice

nice place keep up your hard work 👍

nice place keep up your hard work 👍

Mother Jason and aunt Artemis <3

Hmm never mind the fact that beast protecting their cubs would be aggressive and kill anyone close. Yes let us say Human bad, strong eat weak.

Thanks for the chapter

Good!

More money. But I agree with MC, the fox cubs are pitiful. Oh well.

Foxies~!! An army of foxies is indeed a tempting thought ~

I think you could bring the cubs into his world or find some place where he can hide them and let them grow while he looks after them from time to time, would add something like a mother figure to his persona, plus from the critic above (or below) you need to add some feelings maybe not remake previous chapters but it seems like you have to add them from now on. Abgesehen davon hast du bisher gezeigt dass du das kannst also wirst du das auch noch hinbekommen

tnx for ch