Comments of chapter undefined of Villains also get second chance

i really dislike the both of them.... Rosamund doesn't seem to love Charles so much as so his position and benefits she can have. Charles on the other hand seems to be like Cassius used to be with Elizabeth although he doesn't get to realise it yet .. additionally, having a child with Katherine doesn't include anywhere Rosamund. he looks Katherine as just a host for the Charles and rose to have a child? she doesn't deserve it however he deserves to be cuckold....does Katherine get to have her happy ending she deserves?

I Like the pov alot it lets you know what the other charters are thinking you should do one on killian and his aunt when theyre together i want to know what killian really thinks of her

i would like more Kathrenne and Charles story a little. maybe have the old emperor make some apearence in the plot. btw sry for being afk latley. i had a lot to do with holidays and (faild) my drivers exam.

As long as story's flow is not affected many pov doesn't matter also all these are interconnected so knowing their mind is also good thing...

wow that is the so called true love, right there... and after so much humiliation from him, from rosemound, from the staff is it really that much of a surprise for him the fact that she is disgusted by his touch? what happend to the twins that katherine had in her first life?

Oh God, please no. I am already skipping James' POV since he is not very interesting in my opinion and only skimming through Katherine's POV. Kathrine rocked in her last chapterbuy before that it was painful to read her thoughts. I am still interested in Killian's POV though since he sentenced Marianne to death and now Charles a bit... who is Ian?

I think if you do too many povs the novel gets stalled. I already think there's too many different povs as it is. While it is nice once in a while and certainly adds insight and added detail, we don't need to read about every character. As it is, adding more storylines to the novel without any timely conclusion or advancement of current storylines will drag out the entire novel. If you drag it out too long, you'll lose readers. For me right now, I'm beginning to get frustrated by the changing storylines after every chapter or so. I think you're doing a great job and would like you to keep up the good work, but please keep in mind the slippery slope you are currently on with too many povs, too many storylines, and the constant change of storylines without advancement or conclusion.

The empirer to the Queen wheres the baby

the story is very interesting and i am enjoying it. very well written. plus, the author reads all the suggestions, so she/he takes an interest in her/his audience. I like that as well. just a few too many p.o.v.'s in my opinion. still its an interesting, entertaining storyline.

who's ian again?

I like it. It gives the story more depth

i like povs cause it allows to see the inner workings of the people involved

so he know that she cannot give birth.poor gir

i don't mind with many pov & like it. don't knw abt rest🤔🤔

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I actually prefer 3rd person to p.o.v. There are so many different characters that it gets a bit confusing and boring until you figure out which character is currently the p.o.v. There has yp be a better way to introduce background 0nbthe characters than the constant p.o.v. Thanks.

i like multiple pov,so I think it's good to have other people's pov like this chapter

different povs are good, it tells more about the situation...

I love the different characters' POVs when they are the main persons in the chapter! It allows us readers to get an indepth knowledge of the real feelings of those people ..please continue like this,Author.