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I also prefer you to stick to the present and only to change POV occasionally so that we (the readers) have a better understanding of the characters. Currently I feel that the duke is a real douche. At first I gave him the benefit of the doubt as we were only informed via the POV of the FL. Now that it was switched to his POV... I have to say, that I want to kick him in the you-know-what. Such arrogance (he is a duke -duh!) and the horrible way he speaks to her is absolutely disrespectful. I get that she must have been annoying in the past but she did not harm anyone physically and was blinded by love. There is surely more stuff in his past that contribues to him acting like that but it is no excuse. He always keeps her in the dark (what happened to her dowry?) and therefore she never had a real chance. I personally can't stand such people in real life so it is very hard for me to sympathise with him. If it were not for Killian (what a blessing) I would have rooted for her to leave his sorry ass. I also agree to add sections describing events of the past (even a chapter) if it is necessary for the plot and character development. I love the FL and how she does not longer give a hoot about the douche-duke. She deserves better than such a toxic man. I mean, I love me some tsundere but this guy is hard inside and out. No soft spot whatsoever. I also do not like how he treats his son. I get that he is his heir but come on man! Cut him some slack! He is still a kid and surrounded by toxic people (except his regressed step-mom... she is a peach!). Well yeah, I love the story and that FL is taking names and kicking ass. Go FL! My biggest wish is that she ends up in a healthy, loving and honest relationship with someone who respects her as a woman and as a person. Author-sama, please make the duke redeem himself (like FL is trying to do in this life) or make him more sympathetic. Otherwise introduce someone else that can bring (romantic) happiness to FL. I feel so bad for her
author just go with d flow of present moment ,u can add small pov here and there but plz Nt whole chapter. if u make each and everyone pov then it would take 4 to 5 chapter to complete one scenario .sorry for ur stockpile chapters. author plz try it best to update one chapter per day plz. plz do make FL more sassy one. plz do make Ml vinegar jar
I don't hate the past recollection but I don't want to see the Duke and Elizabeth's love story. I think stick to the presentđ€đ. Good story, very interesting because I would have dropped it when I saw it was ongoing. Definatly the best fantasy romance I have ever read so don't give up, keep updating I support uđ€. I freaking loveeeeee this story.đđ
continue with the present and eventually reveal the bits of the past when needed... past is important too but revealing it all at once could be boring or could raise conflicts between the thoughts that we have for the characters. and don't worry dear author you're doing great just keep it up.. like the last few chapters. and that dumb king needs to remove his blindfold and see what's really there... who really is the friends and who's the real enemy
Past is important as it defines the present and future but yet again if we keep dwelling in the past we might forget about the present. It is up to you dear author whatever you choose we will support it so you do not have to stress yourself over this matter just write whatever you want and we readers will go with the flow. Thank you for the hardwork dear author đ.
hello. thank you for your hard work. yes i want to know more about the past but not all at once. it changes my view of the characters and the story. now i realy hate the male lead and do not want to simphatize with him for losing his 1st wife untill he gets some well deserved face slaps. and also i am dyng to know what happened with the money from the FL. sorry if this gives you more work. thank you.
100% support anythiNg you have in store for us readers. I wouls like to input a suggestion though. Suggestion: if you will be changing point of views(POVâs) i would appreciate if there was a line signaling the POV change and whose POV we will be reading in. If we have a flashback or someThing of the sort or a dream please warn us before it happens. The story kinda gets confusing when i am not warned about POV changes and if i am currently reading a flash back or not.
I think it would be nice if you did it however you wanted to. As I reader I enjoy each part, I personally prefer if you continued with the main plot, as I am interested in the trial, Isabella and those things, but getting to know the "background" of the story and the characters past is also interesting so whatever you decide to do will be alright ^^