nishidurani
Depends on what you're going for. Taking it from Isabella's perspective can give a more satisfying depth to the story. However, some readers may feel uncomfortable reading from Isabella's perspective, as she is the "villain" and her actions are "villainous". Seeing things from her perspective is like supporting one person then forcefully being shoved into the opposing person's mind. It's unpleasant. On the other hand, 3rd person perspective gives the reader background information without forcing that feeling of ickiness onto readers. However, it's not as in depth as writing in Isabella's POV. I personally feel like omniscient 3rd perspective is better, in most novels I am a die-hard fan of the protagonist😁. I don't like the icky feeling that comes with seeing things from Isabella's POV. This is my outlook. Whichever perspective you choose, I will support you in your writing.
I like the way it was written before.... In my opinion, the 3rd POV and Isabelle’s POV are both good in its own way. Isabelle’s POV shows more character and feelings but some parts doesnt feel right for her to say. And with 3rd POV it’s well put togther but it losses isabelle’s thoughts.. so I think a combination of both is good.Just my opinion, at the end of the day, its your novel and you can do whatever you want [img=recommend] I support you in anything you do cause this is a really good novel and I look forward to your development! [img=update][img=recommend]
I have always appreciated other Characters points of view in the same story. It adds so much more depth to the story as a whole. Killian’s perspective, as well as Cassius’ perspective, also helps the reader to understand why they are the way they are, and why they do what they do. All in all, i am enjoying this story.