Salted Fish Jienan
This chapter was felt kinda sluggish and slow, with lots of repeating the same thing over and over, especially at the beginning where it basically says "Olivia's appearance didn't affect much" in like 5 different ways.
Yeah, I just hate how it was spaced, I would see the space and expect something slightly different only to read basically the same thing.
Demonshadow639:That can be needed, because it was for different reasons and how the other factors played into it. Just like he mentioned the pronce a few times.
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