Auroraaa
Your story concept is indeed good. The main problem is I am really disappointed with your writing. Because, in each and every chapter the character's doesn't even have a proper communication ( everything is in cliffhanger) and that might lead to future misunderstanding ( i'm not a fan of it personally) that is literally irritating and annoying at the same time. I'm not criticizing you, just stating my views. Hope you understand. All the best