J_Titan
if you're gonna bring new characters please give an explanation after they appear immediately *an author's note or an side chapter to explain why they are there *or some snippets that there are OC or another universe characters, that's why there is a lashes in previews chapter. *Gilgamesh works and artoria and others showing up because they are in the same universe so there are no "why they showed up!?" response and also they've been hinted early on so its ok. wish this help Author and also yes just continue your work please.
The story is good just the last chapter with EMIYA part was unecessary so if you could delete that plotline than i think it would be good. U could make it so instead of EMIYA nomu hurt him and he will recover by either himself or by using kaminari's quirk like as a cheat. But yeah do contiue the story just edit that part out tho, a lot of people are not happy with adding an unecessary character in al already awesome plot.
Yes. Continue I really liked this way that you are taking the story, the gesture as you presented the heroines I liked, the reason that you made the main character have your goal was very good and real since when the person does something that she considers it very bad and then resolves it after he has caused a lot of damage that he blames a lot, they generally have no purpose to live and they are brooding over it and to resolve it, something must come from someone else who marks him a lot, and in this story you made it as the family he protects, so for me you continue this story until the end, because, even if you donât really like how it ended, youâll learn a lot how to do a much better one, because , he will have learned a lot from this one. So keep it up and always try to get better until the one who didnât like this one likes your next one.
Yes, continue! Ignore the haters, as long as YOUR work matters to some people (me included), then it's worth it! Look for the silver lining. Note: I'm usually silent (I don't comment much or often đ¶), but I really appreciate this masterpiece. "Good job, Author-shounen!" đ *pst* Hahahaha, nice job really, keep it up! đ