Comments of chapter undefined of Apotheosis.
Apotheosis.
GrotesqueIce
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I wanna give you two suggestions that can probably help you. The first one is to write smaller paragraphs with around four to five lines. The reason is that almost all readers use App and reading a paragraph with ten or above lines can kill their interest. The second is that try to put some dialogues/conversations in the early chapters. It's another way of attracting readers. You can skip the second one for this story but maybe it can be useful in the future. (You can delete it after readingđ)
Yes. It has come to my attention that I need to put spaces for it not to appear text heavy for mobile users. Rest assured that I have formatted future episodes. Previous episodes will be reformatted soon. I apologize fpr the inconvenience. Thank you very much for taking an intererest to my story. I will be sure to incorporate that element in the future.
