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Comments of chapter undefined of The Epic of Leviathan

Dvaron_Edelweiss
Dvaron_EdelweissLv4Dvaron_Edelweiss

Doped Apocalipse... (Because of the Butterfly Effect the ritual is botched up.)

Genist
GenistLv4Genist

I really hope MCU isn't the world right after Harry Potter, because that would completely invalidate any and all worlds that come after. To deal with MCU the MC would have to become so strong that any other world you'll have him go to afterwards will be like an elephant dealing with ants, so I hope you're prepared for finding another way to keep the story interesting in that case.

Acaro_venduto
Acaro_vendutoLv4Acaro_venduto

Thank you author-sama for the chapter

FOX_ZRS
FOX_ZRSLv4FOX_ZRS

Thanks for the chapter...

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Anthony_Higgin
Anthony_HigginLv4Anthony_Higgin

Thanks for the chapter.

IDLE_Chaos
IDLE_ChaosLv4IDLE_Chaos

Thanks for the chapter

Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101Lv6Dragonia_101

thanks for the chapter

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

ARIO_VANISH
ARIO_VANISHLv5ARIO_VANISH

(・o・)

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

give Reo's family the bloodline of Celestial immortals, but make them invulnerable. can't be killed by The Horde insects, Beyonders or any others. in their Celestials completed metalic forms they average 2000 feet tall and 260 tons( marvel Celestials wiki ). usually the family looks humanoid and you can customize their gifts.

RyuJack
RyuJackLv3RyuJack

Thanks for chapter

Aku03
Aku03Lv6Aku03

Thanks for the chapter!

netto123
netto123Lv1netto123

Obrigado pelo capítulo

MarkuzBlack
MarkuzBlackLv6MarkuzBlack

👍👍👍

Genist
GenistLv4Genist

going along the line of 'it ended in the same way I read in the story' is a really bad way of telling a story. Not everybody reading fanfiction will have even read all the Harry Potters books or even remember everything that happened. Do something along the lines of 'and just like in the books, Cedric managed to get his egg by distracting the dragon with a conjured goat' or something.

Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron

Thanks for the chapter

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

Thanks for the chapter author 👍👍👍👍