That was an extremely interesting opening chapter. I mean, color me surprised, but for a website like Webnovel where everything remains fairly the same, it's super interesting.
Your story is quite interesting and you weave the tale well. Your grammar is, as you sadi, not the best. Do you have anyone who can go over it with you or edit for you? It is a shame to let your less-than-stellar writing take away from your story.
Intriguing start and very good written... I'll take my time to read...
Hm, but why there's no voting option in this book? This book got restricted. You can contact webnovel admin on discord to get it whitelisted...
