Comments of chapter undefined of Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer
Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer
GNaNA
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it was going good and like actual game of thrones with season 8 it went all down hill from here ,as there numerous plots here made by stupid characters like cercie succeeding which doesn't make sense and also mc having a bad end
I have to respect your opinion. Not everyone like the same thing. I intended not to show Cersei's scheme since the start and only show it at the end for two reason. I wanted everyone to guess the mole on Edward's side and show everyone that every chapter is important. Some readers disliked the ten chapters I gave to Corenna and Brienne when they were secretly the heroes in my story. The second thing, I wanted everyone to see the period this scheme took and the hidden agenda that took place for more than twenty years. Even if Cersei was dumb, twenty years scheme would work anyway because no one would look that far. As for the other novel, I decreased the author's interaction with the MC but he would not disappear. Let's say, he would give Eddard some challenges. As for Dorne, I can't change anything about it.
RDAT:i dislike cercie and her making this seems way out of character mostly cause of you fast-forwarding certain parts ,so we can get into canon time sooner which might cost her showing she is smarter then i realize to go unnoticed but still it doesn't change the fact you just made something akin to the og game of thrones season 8 and also adding the god plot was weird which is one of the main reasons im not reading the other version besides the fact i hate dorn
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No, Thanks to you we got to read one of the best fanfictions on got. I have read most of them and I would say you get to be the 2nd best in my list First goes to A new world to conquer on ff.net. So thank you and will meet you on the next great adventure. (It was good for timepass during the pandemic)
