This is getting too ridiculous. This guy is getting so sadistic that he's always wondering about killing someone so that a threat to his sons is removed.
I like your story but stop getting sidetracked . it feels like you have more backstory in your chapters then what is currently going on. it's been 2 chapters for just a greeting the starks. it's like your filling it with filler bc you cant figure out where to go next in the story
