Comments of chapter undefined of The King Alpha’s Mate

No offense but please correct your grammar. It is not quite pleasing to correct the sentences in your mind...

It is getting slightly better but the dialogue and grammar issues get major points off!

This seems like it could be a good story but the Grammer is awful..I do hope it gets better as at yes it is difficult to step back and say ohh, this is what you meant.

I’m liking the story but the grammar is killing me.

This book would be good if you didn't keep using the contraction of you are (you're) instead of your. Sorry can't read this any more.

story line is good but choice of words is tacky...... i keep rolling my eyes...u dnt have to repeat malte,alpha beta ever so often

You don't have time to explain to the woman you abducted who you are and what it means to be your mate? This 8s why you don't have any friends, Jack. Read a few books.

nice 👍

How is explaining all this going to change her mind. It would only make most people worse. It might make her think she is crazy especially if she didn’t believe. 🤣🤣

i love the story

The story appears good in theory but I am not sure how much longer I can take the gramm atical errors. It’s such a turn off.

Great read

People please keep in mind the author most likely doesn’t speak English

I'm liking the story line so far

i like your plot in this

wow this getting really good