Comments of chapter undefined of Soulbound

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

I am happy with the book

Hats off to you author. You have written the feeling so beautiful. I am speechless❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Too many words used. no punctuations used to make the readers understand. This is a beautiful story, i love the immense and pure love the characters feel for each other and i really want to follow through but it’s a slow burn with too many unclear sentence. makes me want to stop reading.

This is like a play. So much unnecessary thoughts. Hard to follow the story.

I sometimes forget where the real story is emotion explained in very lengthy that I feel sometimes that I m loosing intrest. I love the story but it is very slow that I feel sometimes it should go little faster on