I sometimes forget where the real story is emotion explained in very lengthy that I feel sometimes that I m loosing intrest. I love the story but it is very slow that I feel sometimes it should go little faster on
writer I appreciate your efforts and I assure you that I definitely read your story what emotion story want to say I will definitely read it. now i m reading another story when I will finish my current story I will definitely read your story thankyou[img=recommend]
Too many words used. no punctuations used to make the readers understand.
This is a beautiful story, i love the immense and pure love the characters feel for each other and i really want to follow through but it’s a slow burn with too many unclear sentence. makes me want to stop reading.