LazySageDao
in my opinion is not smart to torture every possible future cultivator like this,most would end up having traumas forever it's good to filter out the good seed from the average, but the average is still needed it, like who will do the basics tasks of the sect and guard without them? it's a sect for a reason
This is bad. It makes him very attached to his family, and every time she says, he remembers his happy memories, or something like that. You make it seem like his path to cultivation is not for the sake of immortality and rule like anyone else, but only for the sake of his family and his clan. He is still a worldly person connected to everyone around him.