don_offl
You're really dragging the novel backwards, you gave Michael stupid weaknesses, like the son who stupidly had the family drama that lasted too long now you're going for gaya that he will surely die for a relative I see the generic route, it wasn't this " badas"? You said that the novel would not be cliché but in the end it ended up being with that of the "light against the darkness" where the brother is the stupid one and the mc is the long-suffering one, chapters where the dark lord is mentioned repeatedly until he gets tired and without counting the enigma the immortal the almighty andreas !!!!
it is very idiotic of vedora to get angry and starts destroying the castle which is already in incomplete state (also running low in funds for the castle) instead vedora should have directed that anger towards there enemies disappointing to see gaya taking rash decision as she is in the position of a leader and doing nothing when vedora was on a rampage (it is understandable that she lost a close family member but atleast show some responsibility and don't just shut yourself inside a room)