This is the FIRST TODAG fan-fiction I know of that finally brings Yang Xin, and I am very proud of our MC not neglecting his girls and family! Truly a good fan-fiction!
fellow daoist of words, you have an interesting path yet you do not put more in your endeavour this will lead you to a bottleneck and many demons(readers) coming up to you. I suggest to give more words in your dao(story) in order to solidify it.