Comments of chapter undefined of Rare Bird [BL]
Rare Bird [BL]
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It's not bad so far, but the problem is that you have too many tense changes, y'know. You go from describing things to it is then to it was. Try to keep it consistent in one paragraph. If that doesn't make sense, I'll explain further!
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