Comments of chapter undefined of Kingmaker's Revenge
Kingmaker's Revenge
saemi
Chapter comments47
I really like the chapter so far! The grammar and writing style is definitely better than many novels here. I’m looking forward to an evil female protagonist 🤭✨ For constructive criticism, it was a bit hard to visualize the scenes because there wasn’t really much of a description for the surroundings/settings. The jump between the time travel felt awkward because of that. Fighting author 🤗
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