Comments of chapter undefined of Eighteen Again: The CEO's Wife was a Delinquent
Eighteen Again: The CEO's Wife was a Delinquent
Aciee_GelaTin
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On of My biggest pet peeves in romance novels is when the FL forgives the ML WAYYYY too soon. After years of abuse, I was so Afraid that cassidy was immEdiately going to fall back into old habiTs and fall for Adrian again without so much as a sorry or retRibution. but my god The build up to get to this point is gosh darn perfect. Their time apart and finding their way back to each other is so organic And real that i have no choice but cry happy tears for them! Such a saTisfying reuNion. BRAVO AUTHOR-SAN BRAVO
Haha that last bit about the suffering is so spot on! Why should Adrian be given an out so soon? Amnesia or not, thats just not how You treat a human being, Whats more your wife! I think your pacing was perfect and so on point! Please stay true to yourself! You have a vision and you should stick to it! The rest is just noise. Im glad to be able to be a part of the world you are building even if its just as a reader! đ
Aciee_GelaTin:You know, you owe me a tissue. This made me cry too! I'm glad that I'm able to carry out the whole retribution arc as well ^_^ I was tempted to make them get back together much earlier than this, and I also kept seeing comments that this had been dragged on for too long. But I know what I'm going to write - the pace, the events, the development, and the buildup. So, I held back and told myself that it wasn't time yet ^.^ I just didn't expect that the readers had been wanting them to reunite so bad (and I was like 'No! Suffer some more! I'll suffer too cuz we knew we all wanted this before!')
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