Comments of chapter undefined of While Others Cultivate, I Use My Multiverse System

Is anyone else wondering what the **** is going on in this novel?

It was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is sick, my father is drunk, cultivating for some reason hides, now some magic of feelings. It sucks so far. I would, for example, like to learn more from the cougars of the worldIt was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is sick, my father is drunk, cultivating for some reason hides, now some magic of feelings. It sucks so far. I would, for example, like to learn more from the cougars of the world It was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is sick, my father is drunk, cultivating for some reason hides, now some magic of feelings. It sucks so far. I would, for example, like to learn more from the cougars of the worldIt was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is sick, my father is drunk, cultivating for some reason hides, now some magic of feelings. It sucks so far. I would, for example, like to learn more from the desert world, It was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is sick, my father is drunk, cultivating for some reason hides, now some magic of feelings. It sucks so far. I would, for example, like to learn more from the desert world, and the author It was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is sick, my father is drunk, cultivating for some reason hides, now some magic of feelings. It sucks so far. I would, for example, like to learn more from the desert world, and the authorIt was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is sick, my father is drunk, cultivating for some reason hides, now some magic of feelings. It sucks so far. I would, for example, like to learn more from the desert world, and the author onIt was an interesting idea, but everything seems so sharp. It's all too ragged. I would advise the author to devote more time to the arrangement of the world. Very little information was given for fifteen chapters. We also need a better backstory. A year has passed, some incomprehensible system, two worlds have already passed, the mother is s

Yeah dropping. Good premise, the author just isn't good enough to execute it well though.

I love how the MC was calling others simps, Yet one red dressed woman later and ge turns into a complete fool!

Wow. Taking all his money and still demanding a favor...and the information broker was a rip-off?

Then the second thing he does once he's back on earth after saving his mother is to save someone else using his new abilities even at the risk of being exposed or worst still teaching someone else

Is he gonna stay so.....stupid.

At last [img=recommend]

The woman seems suspicious to me. 🧐

Thanks for the chapter

how old is that young woman and how old is the mc in high school? and why is he calling her a young woman but it's obvious that she is older than him just base on character information ???

just use the gold to buy the stone

I appreciate the author and his story but I felt confusion while reading this. I hope the author manages to fix this. I trust that he can because he already wrote many books already