Comments of chapter undefined of Became The Secret Mob: Limei's Twist of Love [Closed]

let me add. this is very good. even how the chapter ended is very good.

Kudos, the description Is well to do. Hmmm well done.

Amazing, truly a gem tbh. I understand every bit of it, and the subtle expressions. A cooler resilience combined with the resolve of the lady will be a hot combo.

all in all, you've arranged them pretty neat and its very much easier to read now, very good job!

love it so far, it's do descriptive and interesting.... honestly.... an overall great story

wow this is a great start for a story! and I love the poem in the first part! It was so captivating! i love it! 😍

wow you described her quite hot. the retorts and exchange are amazing as well.