Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancients World

I have a suggestion, take it as you like. You should maybe skip paragraph when In dialogue. An when the PoV character is talking to itself, you leave it in the same paragraph. I think it would make the reading. Anyway, quite original this way of introducing PoV, as a fellow author myself who read quite a lot of books, this is a first. Keep it up 😊

i dont often comment on storys but with this one i have to, keep up the good work it's an amazing story

thanks for the chapter btw,Congrats Author-san for this novel being in weekly future^^

moooooorrrrrreeee

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Ty for chap

thanks for the chapter

thx for the chapter!!

Thanks for the chapter!!

Thanks for the chapter~🐱

Ok. That mom is kind of psycho

Thanks!

thx for heads up

I love your story it is very interesting and unique, makes you want to continue reading to learn what comes next.

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thanks for the chap author!