Mfonemana Uduak
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I. Confused. As Fuck
Is there a missing prolouge? who tf is Tyrania, and what is Deranox?besides that its just so confusing and too fast
Poorly explained
mystery is good but too much will make the story very vague and confusing.
confused also don't like her shes like a clingy thot
i just wish there were tags. and it seems there is romance in this one or worst harem. so im out. thank you author.
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leh meep
like please
Theres such a big backstory thats left half explained that it brings away the detaiks from the present story line
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confusion
Thanks for the chapter đ
to much information for a first chapter
thanks