Comments of chapter undefined of FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION

The Haze of the cruel sea dissipates in a flash, The world is divided with factions in a clash, A thousand arrows fire up the Battlefield- Who has a pure heart? Who is missing his love? He was in his prime of his life- But, Who was it that calls the world home? Who was it that rode over his death? -RSK

you are damn poetic! 😁 keep it up![img=update]

Very poetic, the words described the scenario vividly. But some readers without vast vocabulary might have a hard time. Overall, I love this chapter. Your prologue was an opening for RPG stories, but since I've read the synopsis, I love how you used your chosen words.

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