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Comments of chapter undefined of The Tale Of Kitsuna

Lele_Lynn
Lele_LynnLv2Lele_Lynn

Looks good

haakuman
haakumanLv4haakuman

😑 If you’ve been tortured for years I dont think you’d be having normal, lighthearted conversations anytime soon.

ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13ArtoriaPendragon_

Why is she acting so normally? She Was tortured for 5 years

1stSlug
1stSlugLv131stSlug

@Author: Your plot is shoddy illogical mess! You've got a MC who after being tortured for a solid 5 years is able to not only hold a reasonable conversation with strangers (even though you've just stated that the MC was an introvert and sucked at talking to others) but also able to make jokes about what happened. Most people who've experienced a similar situation, or close to it, would be either in a corner sobbing or staring off into space with dead fish eyes, probably both. Not to mention the fact that somehow people know the MC is a reincarnated person and how in the hell is the MC not aware of magic or what it can do, even though the MC has lived 17 years in that world prior being reincarnated?! I'm actually curious as to whether you were drunk or high (both?!) when you started to write this story or just generally incapable of actual logical plot progression?

NarksTv
NarksTvLv13NarksTv

You really need a reason for why she is so casual before this chapter brcouse thus is where your gonna lose readers becouse after being tortured for 5 years this doesn’t make sense

Ikar0z
Ikar0zLv13Ikar0z

And this chapter just destroyed any hope i had in this novel. why write torture and suffering if its just gona be played off as not having any impact? tog gain powers? there äre a hundred other way to do that....

iron_wolf
iron_wolfLv13iron_wolf

so how exactly do they know she reincarnated? not to mention k ow everything how his social life for a different world? or how they know the daughter was in his class in the other world? there are sooooo many bs points that are glossed over after being brought up.

DaoistzieYEe
DaoistzieYEeLv13DaoistzieYEe

Makotobut_diff
Makotobut_diffLv13Makotobut_diff

BRO THIS IS SO ILLOGICAL

Fjdjj_Hfhfh
Fjdjj_HfhfhLv2Fjdjj_Hfhfh

No. Just no.

ComfyPiggy
ComfyPiggyLv13ComfyPiggy

love the story. keep up the good work author

The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4The_Dark_Hydrax

Fantasy stories are fantasies for a reason logic doesn't apply to them, just like how magic defies the laws of physics. Basically, hush and read otherwise leave

herohero
heroheroLv12herohero

its the small things that ruin this story for me, firstly how did the mc know this doctor was a guy, secoundly how does the mc know what that blood was, thirdly, is no one else has ever survived the blood then how do they know what it does, why is it valuble abyway, i get that it comes from some over power entity. but realy, not every part of it would have use, and if all it did was kill people then whats it good for, poison. the level of contnuity errors make my brain hurt, after every sejtence i have to wonder, what was wrong in that one. and one more thing, a reincarnator calling their new dad daddy, thats descostang.

RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

Thanks for the chapter

recon100035
recon100035Lv13recon100035

thx for chapter

Bluez_Yuri
Bluez_YuriLv3Bluez_Yuri

little weird but for now hopeful it'll be explain later

PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

DaoistzieYEe
DaoistzieYEeLv13DaoistzieYEe

DaoistzieYEe
DaoistzieYEeLv13DaoistzieYEe

Gg

Michael_Crew
Michael_CrewLv15Michael_Crew

when is the next update?