Comments of chapter undefined of MY Perfect Life As A Reincarnation!

you have images of the MC or the girls?

Again here, Preyz. i lke the fact that the storie advances time as it needs to, it makes it feel as if we aren't wasting time in more than whats necesary, with the little downside that it feels as if there isn't direction at all, but that may be changed. I noticed a really big problem that i saw you had, but you had soo many other problems back there that i forgot. and thats that some descriptors and or interactions feel more like insted of the characters, are YOU (the author) the one that say's so, unlike a narrator. for example, the "a loli girl" feels like YOU say it, since its a description but its not objective nor referencing any other character, if was just "a short girl "a little kid" or "a child" it will had just felt like what was happening, but there, it just feels as if the author is the one speaking about. You should watchout for that, it can kill immersion pretty fast. also, not many spelling mistakes, and thats good, but found like 3 or so

sorry I don't...

good. Waiting for the hot scenes, you should have the unerring skill of Yuki Rito (perverted luck).

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!

Thanks for this chapter

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Thank you for the chapter Although the time of the story is mobing too fast, I still hope it will be a good story

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thanks for the chapter 😊😊☺️