Comments of chapter undefined of Military System god realm revolution

I can see this has potential, but it's extremely difficult to read. It's just...terrible.

Interesting, idea. hopefully the language gets better because this stuff is almost unreadable.

it was so painful to read. I did not understand 90%of what I just read

didnt read. asking before I do....cant cultivators and anyone supernatural just dodge or tank the bullets or just avoid it with cultivation shit? cause normal fodders can even throw shit faster than a bullet in most fiction works, And shoot down planes easily

btw when Author likes the only comment that praises him you can tell there is a problem here

I’ve read machine translations better than this novel! I iust hope the author finds a GOD LEVEL editor and fix this novel to even have a chance of being legible.

wtf am I reading? if I can read properly that is

thanks

interesting start hope he becomes op fast otherwise it will be a very boring and slow kingdom build. that Lord of technology or whatever is good but even that got boring felt dragged out

This chapter’s Transition is weird hard to read but you can still see the separations though difficult

Thanks for the chapter 💖

Use grammarly. It will help you. i swear. Please

oof

this is nice!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

It's a great start and have a vast potential, however, the grammars are greatly off to the point that it made me confuse, Ill grab this one back if the grammar were to be fix...