Comments of chapter undefined of CEO Daddy, Let's Get Mommy

Heya author, I don't think you should like...use sanskrit in middle of the chapter, I mean if I didn't know better it sometimes feels like you are cursing or using witchcraft spells. This language is so intense. Owiii I'm scared.😱🙀(shiver)(shiver)!!!

The story is a little convoluted but i do understand that the concept of the story has changed. I do like story better now as i almost stopped reading it in beginning but it has changed the beginning should be rewritten so that it all flows better and there’s no confusion. There needs to be some serious translating as well as editing because the book speaks in very broken English. And finally the cost to read a chapter is based on the length of the chapter having authors notes that is as long as chapter itself is a ripoff! Most people don’t read authors notes but if they do it should be a short paragraph at MOST so you aren’t raising the coin cost much.

your story is superb ...............i also like to read sanskrit but not so good .....even my mother still scold me that ii aave ever given much preference to sanskrit even ot is our origin ........and please continue with your great effort and also use sanskrit .....ii will love to read it .......and why are you so underrated.....i only found your book today only ....and was totally engrossed with it ....................ii loved it so far ......hope there are lot of mysteries and both the lead will get together fast ......

I thought it turned a bit weird sorry if I am saying this but it went from being exciting to being weird xx

weird happen l don't know about adding wierd to

This book has seriously caught my interest. plot is getting interesting.

hey author where r u from?I was so surprised when I see sanskrit in between the story like I'm also a sanskrit student but who don't know any of these words but yes I can understand even my name originated from sanskrit means god's beautiful gift 🎁 like it has a really sweet and sour story behind my name.anyways like ur story keep going on ❤️❤️

please do continue using sanskrit as it makes the story more interesting

I'm lost. I'm loving the story.

I am just happy Arther is not her love..because he didn't love his own son who is kid what do you expect from him . And People like Arther love anyone they love only them self

m confused abt NIC. i mean he wanted to patch up FL with her ex husband now he's playing role of future brother in law

After reading chapter I am thinking to start learning Sanskrit again 😃

Nice story author 👌👌👌👌

Wow... Me too i love our sanskrit language... This language is a healer.. Our mere poor vocabulary won't be able to describe its qualities I appreciate you author for bringing light to this language by your book

Thanks for come back n it will b great if u continue with sanskrit as i m also one of ur kind who dsnt know it much wud like to learn from it more😊