Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated into fairy tail

If you are reading this comment your parents will die within 5 years. To undo this curse you need to copy this and paste it on 5 other manga. Sorry y'all i got cursed too, you can't underestimate random people curse .

It’s kinda hard to read with so many grammar mistakes. Missing some commas (,) here and there along with some words. Spacing could be better especially the first paragraph. Some sentences need to be reworked/ reworded. Plus the setting of the story is bad. Ex what city are they in, why is the mc with this group of people, who are they, what do they look like, what were they doing, what is their relationship. The flashback doesn’t make sense since nothing happened in the story. This entire chapter needs to be redone since there’s no description. He might eventually get reincarnated into the fairy tail world however the intro is very important to draw readers in and when there is a lack of description, setting, and so many grammar mistakes it ruins the reading experience. Descriptions are meant to help the readers visualize the world, and characters while the setting adds some color to the story. Without a good setting the story becomes bland and lacks a tone. Ex., rain can be used to set a sad/ depressing tone which builds the setting in the story.